Although we are no where near finishing our thriller course work, we thought it would be a good idea to ask someone what they thought of our film so far. We told this person what our plans were for the rest of it and asked them to comment on our film with the improvement still in mind. This person that we asked used to actually do Media Studies so they would be able to give constructive points. This is what she wrote:
'I like the match on action with the drawers and eyes. The difference between the black and white bits and the colour bits, it adds emphasis on the differences which is good. I like the amount of post-its on the notice board. Its good mise-en-scene use, suggests he's very intense,the black and white also makes the thriller seem more serious and political. Overall its very good so far.
Bad thing - 1. Continuity to 2nd shot, thew mouse is moving2. Some of the shots seem too long.'
This is very useful to us and we need to consider our audience though out the whole process of it. After we have completely finished our thriller, we are going to get her back to comment on it so we can compare the results she gave us and also to see if we have dealt with her criticisms.
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