New Script

After researching for our voice over, we decided that we would get a girl to be the voice over. This is because we didn't want our audience to think that it was our actors thoughts, so stop this confusion we got a girl instead of a boy for our voice over. The girl we got was Zoe Button as she gave it her all and really got into the character and the personality that we needed.
Today we decided the right person that fits the role best for our voice over. We recorded with the previous script which was 'I don't care who this guy is; he knows too much! If this gets out the whole damn Government will go on trail... you have 48 hours... I want him DEAD!!!' Even though the recording we got of this script were brilliant, when we uploaded it and matched it to the action, we found that it was too short (only lasted 8-10 seconds).
Because of this reason we then had to adapt the script to make i longer as we would have liked it to be 23 seconds long. So our new script is:
'(phone rings)
Hello?...
Home affairs office...
no...no you don't understand!
I don't care who this guy is; he knows too much.
If this gets out the whole damn Government will go on trail...
...no...he's too much of a threat to be left alive...
...I'm sick of your excuses...
...you have 48 hours...
...I want him Dead!!!'
Amazingly Zoe actually manged to get it 23 seconds long, so tomorrow we will edit it a bit to make it fit better, but we are all really pleased with what we have got.