We asked 7 different people to watch our thriller opening and ask to answer these questions for us:
1)What you liked?
2)What you didn't you like?
3)What would you improve/change?
And these are their answers:
1) - The colour changes and the titiles
- The actor
- Past and present and itergrated titles
- Most things
- The music
- Colour changes for past and present
- The transition between past and present
- Graphic matches look really good
- Intergrated titles
- The switch from colour to black and white
- Use of colour and black and white
- Music as it ads suspence, it's mysterious and keeps on 'on-edge'
- The music
2) - Not much
- The location
- End sequence could be clearer
- I loved it all
- The fact that its based in a kitchen
- Not much
- Putting the titles into the action
- Don't no
- To complicated for simple minds
- I didn't
- Nothing
- Don't no
3) - Didn't get some of the of the past and present. Needs to be clearer. Perhaps warp the shots together
- Some acting could have been improved
- The end sequence could have been clearer.
- Nothing
- Stop going into the fridge as it makes no sense
- Nothing
- Could be a bit faster
- Keep the music running under the dialogue
- More tense music
- When they are speaking, keep the music
- More dramatic music as it will increse in intensity
- Keep the music in the background the whole way through even when the couple were talking
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