Match On Action-
180 Degree Rule & Eyeline Match-
As I'm sure you can guess, during filming we made a few errors and mistakes, some of which were funnier than others. So, we decided to put all the best ones into a short film so you can see what great efforts we went to to make our film fantastic!
As a tribute to our pre-preliminary task, we decided to use Madness 'Baggy Trousers' as a sort of backing track, and also to highlight our amazing comedic ways! And now, for the first time ever, you can see our entire team on film! You've already met Roisin and me, now meet Gemma and Jade!
So, yeah, these are the bits of film that we decided weren't good enough for the real thing (you'll see why), but were good enough for you to watch!!
This is the first draft of our preliminary task, the version we did when Roisin was ill, and so couldn't be in the film. After editing it using simple straight cuts throughout, and trying to get as much continuity as possible, we then showed it to the class and got feedback from them. Overall, there was a very positive response, and this inspired us to do a very similar piece for our actual task. However, they also gave us some feedback about continuity (as you can see in the video, there is a tripod in one shot, and I use the wrong hand to open the door as well). So in our second attempt, we made sure that there was not only editing continuity, but also mise-en-scene continuity.
As you can see - or hear - we used a Madness track over this piece. Originally we had no music, but we felt that it needed something to make it feel more finished, and so we browsed through the macs and jokingly put this song on. However, we all felt that it actually worked really well, and added a sense of comedy to the footage, which is what we wanted, as the genre we are trying to fit our piece into is teen drama, which quite often has elements of comedy in.
Overall, you can see that this is a good starting point for our actual task to improve from, and hopefully we have!
Rachel, Roisin, Jade & Gemma x
The influence for our Preliminary Task is the teen drama 'Skins'
As Jade is such a talented artist, I thought that I would upload our storyboards so that the whole world can appreciate her skill with a fineliner! This is the first of the two sheets of stills that we drew, as I can't work out how to get the first one coming before the second one (I'll get there in the end!). So basically, yeah... this is what our preliminary task should look like, with a bit of luck! I'll do a second post with the second sheet on it, because I know that everyone reading this is desperate to know the ending to our film, and also because the more posts we do (or look like we've done) the more marks we will get!!
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